Thursday, May 21, 2015

letter home

DEAR MAMA AND PAPA I have just landed in turkey. and we are  under fire heavy fire we are trying to run and then stop at the bank in the beach and build our trench so we can take over I would really like to win my first battle. But it is going to be a tough one to win. well see ya later

2 comments:

  1. There is some good detail in this piece of writing Wyatt I like the bit when you said we'll see you later. Next time you could make a bit longer.
    Next time what peice of writing are you going to do next time????
    ELZ

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.