Monday, May 2, 2016

my holiday recount

In the holidays I went to Hokitika, Ross, Westport, Christchurch and Bula Bula. And in Hoki we went to stumpers and my cousins house we went to the bush and the beach. We went to bula bula and ross together we went elling, hunting for mussels we also went swimming at the pool.Image result for hokitika

5 comments:

  1. Sounds like you had a great holiday Wyatt. I can't wait to read more of your blog posts!

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  2. Hi Wyatt
    I really like the photo you have used. I think you could maybe add a bit more on the post. I love going to Hokitika. What was you favorite part of your holidays?
    Bye From Caitlin

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  3. Hi There Wyatt!
    I really liked your holiday post about when you went to Hokitika, Ross, Westport, Christchurch and Bula Bula. Because I could not go to all of those places in 2 weeks! Something that I think you could improve on though is maybe tell us about some of the things that you did in Christchurch or Westport. Also maybe another thing is maybe if you got any mussels in Bula Bula and Ross. Also when I saw that picture of "HOKITIKA" in wood reminded me about when I went there to play on the beach. Did you go to any beach in Westport or Christchurch?
    Griffin

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