winter wonderland

WALT: Add detail to my writing

SC: Include at least 5 icons from the ‘Adding Detail’ chart.

SC: Include at least two similes or metapores

• You are the character in the picture. Write a list of descriptive words you might use in your description before you start….

• Remember to put you writing into paragraphs.

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As bright as the sun

As tall  as a skyscraper

As cold as a cold winter morning

The trees are as tall as a giraffe

I am as scared as a mouse

The snow is as fluffy as a baby duckling

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On a winter morning I was just about building a snowman when I came up with the best Idea ever stay asleep

I had to because it was 6.30 in the morning. 1 hour later my little brother came in and shouted GET UP IT’S TIME TO BUILD A SNOWMAN. after breakfast we are having a snowball fight I was the winner but I was the best snow fort builder ever. then I spotted a heap of tree’s curved over like a tall tower. I feel very scared on inside for some reason I couldn't stop myself from going as I walk the tree’s are curved over me like a giraffe neck. I walk right home then I tell everybody about my day in class the next day. the end

planet writing

1.music blue hills are small. 2. white fish black and white 3.  4. pink yellow pipes rocky hills 5.school kids teachers.

planet nine super heroes

plan

setting- city,super heros,outside,stripy sky.

characters-jeff the astronaut,my assistant summer and mackenzie, meany,super heros.

problem-mean super hero made all the houses explode,trying to show off.

solution-help by saying I can make houses like in minecraft.

WALT 1: Write at least 5 correct sentences                                                                                                               WALT 2: Write at least 3 paragraphs  

beep beep beep beeep! I just woke up to the sound of my engine ohh no we must be out of fuel. 1 minute has passed and then I heard a big boom. we just hit some planet of a sort. I shouted out get up then I heard a groan that must be the other person I brought with me. Introducing summer and mackenzie and we are on a trip to planet 9. Me Summer and Kenzie. We are at a big rock and we are setting up camp.When I spotted something in the remains of the ship. I just remembered that i had left some cake in the unbreakable case. 10 minutes later I hear a scream back from camp I start running back to camp to see that a alien has broken into camp then they look at me and said do you know how to build “houses”. Because “we” need one to live in a house and then I came up with the most craziest idea ever. For some reason I couldn't say no so I grabbed my ipad and made houses on a game named minecraft. and then hooked it up to the electoral guy who made the houses become real and then we had a whole town for everyone to live in and in a few years we had settled right in and then we found out that this was the town for me and all of my friends. the net day we had a party with superheroes and monsters from other planets and I think that me and all of my friends made  new friends and then we all went home and had a good sleep. in the morning we all had a good breakfast and a new one to. I like trying new things.

my powm

Once the guns would blow on and on never stoping at any cost. As the bombs would explode your ear's apart so I would not keep going on because no matter what you would get shot to smithereens. After the never ending battle nearly 2000,500 or something like that i the last battle that we thought so but bye for now 

letter home

DEAR MAMA AND PAPA I have just landed in turkey. and we are  under fire heavy fire we are trying to run and then stop at the bank in the beach and build our trench so we can take over I would really like to win my first battle. But it is going to be a tough one to win. well see ya later

James and the gaint peach Book rewview

Roald dahl.         

  

I this book a 4 out of 5.                                                                                                                                                 

1. James. the little boy

2.old grasshopper. the mug

3.miss spider. the threader.                                                                                                                         4. ladybird. the mother.                                                                                                                             5. silkworm the other threader.                                                                                                                6. glowworm the light in lady liberty.                                                                                                        7.centerped. the boot man.                                                                                                                                                         

I like this book because it has a lot of describing words and it also has a lot of cool words like faint oozing sink and more. the best part about book was when the peach ran aunt sponge over and same with aunt spiker. and when they landed on top of the emperor stait sky scraper but the only let down was that the spike dident go through someone.                           

all about me

Hi my name is Wyatt I am 9 years old. I like playing with Dylan because he likes all of my favorite things and we have so much in common. And I think me and Dylan will be BFFs