Monday, June 25, 2018

Poems


2 comments:

  1. Wonderful work Wyatt! I love the images you have created. I feel as though I am there. I really liked the line about the man with the coke and you wondering why he needed it all.

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  2. Kia ora Wyatt. My name is Aoife from M2. I think that your poem was really interesting. My favourite part of the story is when your parents finally come and then its your long journey home. This reminds me of every time I go shopping, my Mum usually asks if I want to stay in the car or come but I usually come into the store with her. What do you usually do. Do mostly stay in the car or go into the store? Ka kite till next time.

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